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The story of a girl named saft
2009-06-28 08:45 pm (UTC)
I was going to post anonymously but it makes it less serious. Ripping off a plaster here, quick and simple. I dislike Saft I'm sorry to say. I find her to much of a mary-sue type and too srs.
Firstly I get the feeling you want Saft to experience everything...EVERYTHING. Things have to revolve around her. I've noticed in serveral recent posts that you've made about Saft, and Saft only. That is why you get only about 2 different characters commenting on your post.
Also, she is an OC. For every new person that joins I feel like you're giving them everything at once. If they want to know about your character, they'll read her journal. To be honest I like OC's such as Kavachi and such but yours just pisses me off. She's srs, too srs for my liking and judging by everyone elses comments, for their liking also.
My advice is just to tone-down the srs posts and if you're going to post often, post interaction posts or posts that involve other characters more. I'm sure she'll be liked that way.
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