Date: 2009-02-11 12:56 am (UTC)
ridethetiger: (70)
From: [personal profile] ridethetiger
Eep late cat is late

Hey! I know we kinda talked about it before, but uh, if I haven't said it yet - well for one, you shouldn't be worried for being judged for serious characterization at cldr because... well. You know. :\ It's caps. I believe that's why some became frustrated with Saft because you almost always put srs bzns into what's supposed to be pure horrendously insane cracky fun.

Definitely ease down on the constant "Oh I'm an orphan and a dragon" and all that, y'know? Most everyone who knows Saft knows this already. And for everyone new, you don't have to have her repeat her story over and over again. Be more show and tell. If she's unsure about people then show it through her actions, not coming right out and saying it :D.

Also, like I said before - I'm not sure which Saft is supposed to be. A little withdrawn and shy because she's not used to being around people? Tomboyish but dreamy? Confrontational and snarky (personally I think those snark comments are pretty OOC for Saft)? No one ever said you should only have one trait but having certain ones together clashes and it's like you're trying to push cliche archetypes all into one character and it's not working honey. Stick to a certain thing and let it grow.

And don't be impatient, give yourself room to grow, think it out a little more if you want to have srs plots. But if that's mostly what you want, maybe you should try out Saft at [livejournal.com profile] uncreativity's strictly OC comm, get some experience with fellow OC players. C:

Don't be afraid to as for this kind of thing bb, told you I'm more than willing to help you out. ♥
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